Beautiful portrait! Some comments are:

1) The shadows could be a bit softer I would say. Did you use some kind of reflector? I think that would have helped the overall image as "softness" neatly matches her expression.

2) The composition is good, maybe already a bit too extreme top-heavy. It looks like you wanted to give attention to the lips (good choice), but with this crop there is uncomfortably little room around the eyes. Moving down about 1/2 cm (1/5" ) could be better here. EDIT: I mean having more picture on the upper edge, like Patrick says below.

3) The image sports quite some purple tint on my screen, well, better than green, but a bit too unnatural?

Nice job! 6/8 from me

It has some imbalance issues imo.
From neck and down it is really not much going on.
I think you could show more of top of head instead.

The light seems a bit strong on her forehead, maybe slightly softer brightness in that section.

As always a very beautiful model.

One gotto love her lips...

Nice portrait!....maybe I would have used a larger focal length.....the texture on the background is in this case distracting.....but that is only my personal taste.
Carlos

good portrait.
nice tones.
agree with moser, about more space above.

Nice model and light. I'm not a fan of the soft tone and polished look, but thats maybe just me ^^

Beautiful model! Yeah, i like the colors, agree with Master Patrick about space.

I like the sharpness of the eyes. Not a fan of the highlight on the forehead that runs down the edge of her nose. Also agree about the textured wall being a bit of a distraction. Other than that, well done.

Very beautiful model is a fantastic photo!

The model is great and I agree with almost said here, but I'm a sharp eyes fan, so I kinda miss that a little on this one!

Thanks for all your comments! I will keep it up!
Hugs!

nice portrait

Wow is the first comment I can add. The lighting is first class and really sets a mood, yet you retain the models own personality in the way you have captured the light in her eyes and the textures of her face. Absolutely terrific photograph!

Its magical... +10