Clarity
Clarity
Photography \ Figure | 06/07/09 @380 |
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Model: Aracely Basaldua.
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06/07/09 @478
1) The shadows could be a bit softer I would say. Did you use some kind of reflector? I think that would have helped the overall image as "softness" neatly matches her expression.
2) The composition is good, maybe already a bit too extreme top-heavy. It looks like you wanted to give attention to the lips (good choice), but with this crop there is uncomfortably little room around the eyes. Moving down about 1/2 cm (1/5" ) could be better here. EDIT: I mean having more picture on the upper edge, like Patrick says below.
3) The image sports quite some purple tint on my screen, well, better than green, but a bit too unnatural?
Nice job! 6/8 from me
06/07/09 @523
From neck and down it is really not much going on.
I think you could show more of top of head instead.
The light seems a bit strong on her forehead, maybe slightly softer brightness in that section.
As always a very beautiful model.
One gotto love her lips...
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Carlos
06/07/09 @795
nice tones.
agree with moser, about more space above.
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Hugs!
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